I hated the chorus of the first song I wrote, but will probably post it in the next day or so anyway.
Anyway, since I did not like it enough, I grabbed my 2 string bass, plugged in with a lot of gain and just played, then wrote about something that …well…took about 15 minutes, and thought "what would Patrick write"
lyrics
I've been asked to give away my feelings
feelings I don't liketo share
asked to give away my feelings
cause its the only way out of here
and Im locked inside
I've been asked to give away some answers
answers that you'd like to hear
asked if I could give some answers
cause if I do i might be free
inside my mind
oooh ooh my mind
oooh ooh is mine
but Im locked inside
asked if I could solve a problem
a problem you seem to see
asked if I could solve a problem
and the problem I guess is me
guess its me
wake up and take you pills
wake up and take your pills
wake up and take your pills
and be a good boy and sleep
oooh ooh my mind
oooh ooh my mind
but Im locked inside
asked to give away my feelings
feelings I don't want to share
asked to give away my feelings
but Id like to get out of here
credits
from Round 5, Week 3,
released February 9, 2015
2 string bass and vocals- clay
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