DD will prob say I spent too much time on production (which to be honest is right in that I"m really trying to use this round to beef up on that aspect). That said, I did try to tighten up the verses / chorus and improve on the overall sentiment - make it more personal to me.
lyrics
Partners in every way
Sent from above
Thankful for each day
For for for real love
Some things have changed yeah
Still burning bright
Know I belong hea
With with with you tonight
Straight from the heart
Know when it's right
Had me love at first site
Others screaming and scheming
Just ain't us
That's How it feels
When it's real love
Lost for a long time
Think you were too
Looking for someone
Paying our dues
Fun when we found it
Felt like a dream
First we doubted
Then we made a family
credits
from Round 10, Week 5-6 (Song 3),
released February 29, 2016
Actually worked a little on this in Flytrap North vs. Flytrap iOs.
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