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Round 24, Week 10

by Monday Morning 3AM Music Club

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1.
Started on Madison Avenue, Really not my scene Took a cab to the Bowery, didn’t recognize a thing But when I hit Central Park That’s where she stole my heart An then it changed in a NY minute Never knew u til til I dropped down in it Here in my city that never sleeps I found my my love in the city streets In a NY minute We’re in it, to win it Heard there was music in Greenpoint, blend of the old and the new A straight up to sugar hill, saw the Apollo shining thru And when I tried to retreat She dropped me to my knees
2.
you seem like a good time my kind of sin if you got a little time, I think I’ll take you for a spin I see them bright lights and the music so loud but every time I look it seems I’ve lost you in the crowd hey, where’d you go? let’s walk the midway love that harvest moon you, in that cotton candy dress I could eat you with a spoon wait, where you going? you got something on the side but you'll meet me by the bandstand and take me for a ride you gonna show? thought you were mine, but here’s the big surprise them boys are always lurking in the corners of your eyes they’re all lined up, like they're feedin’ at the trough stop this love, I think I wanna get off so find yourself a new game something to do that wheel it keeps on turning til it brings me someone new it’s not the first time somebody took me for a ride you can knock here all you want but this car is occupied I don’t need ya thought you were mine, but here’s the big surprise them boys are always lurking in the corners of your eyes they’re all lined up, like they're feedin’ at the trough stop this love, I think I wanna get off
3.
This ain’t my first rodeo I’ve been around for a while Had my fair share Of heartaches and smiles But you changed me With the sound of your voice Yeh it’s funny I didn’t have a choice Used to be if I heard my name I was in trouble Didn’t use words to make a point I used my knuckles I was a fool But now I’m changed By the love your voice and The way you call my name I’ll come running every time It’s not a question of if I’ll come How far do I have to run? It’s used to be bad news When I was recognized Told to stand up and be identified I’d just want to get gone Disappear and start a different life But you put love into my name And it helped me see All the possibilities of what I might be I can’t explain But you changed me With the sound of your voice and The way you call my name Now I come running every time It’s not a question of if I’ll come How far do I have to run? To be there Nothing else can compare To the sound of your voice in a refrain Hearing the way You call my name Bridge You can never say it too much I can never get enough The way you call my name Now I come running every time It’s not a question of if I’ll come How far do I have to run? To be there Nothing else can compare To the sound of your voice in a refrain Hearing the way You call my name
4.
I might be mistaken But I feel like I hear the sound of a lonely heart breaking Whenever I’m around you It’s a lonesome sound somewhere between Loretta and Hank And while we’re being frank I’ll tell you it just makes me wanna order Another round or two Then spin you around to that jukebox song Forgive me if I’ve got it wrong But I’ve just gotta say I think you belong In the arms of a man When the day is through Who loves you The way I do I could be misperceiving But there’s a dance a man does with his eyes when he’s been deceiving The one he made his vows to It’s a shift to left and then a shift to the right Pretending not to see what’s in plain sight but I don’t have to tell you How he’s been looking at you We’ve all got our games we play But darlin’ there’s a better way Than to let your one and only life slip away Waiting round for a man Whose made other plans You can wake me up if I’m dreaming But I could swear I hear the sound of a neglected heart scheming How to set itself free Or maybe it’s a chorus of the angels of high Bringing these hopeful tears to my eyes I can’t tell you Maybe you can tell me? If you’ll meet me here on the other side Of that lonesome road, long and wide I just want you to know that I can provide The arms of a man When the day is through Who loves you The way I do I’m just a man who loves you The way I do
5.
v1: Just a boy of 6 or 7, runnin' from some things he's yet to know Lookin' for something to believe in Searchin' for something to call his own pre: He had a slight inclination to go a bit too far But he hears his mama, callin' across the yard ch: "When the light begins to fade, you should probably make your way Back home, where we're all waiting for you Your dinner is on your plate and there's a cold glass of lemonade and family that loves you, right & true" v2: Now a man, but not much older Runnin' from the love he had at home A constant look across his shoulder A righteous thrill in the unknown pre: He had a slight inclination to go a bit too far Scaled the highest of heights, but that's a long way to fall ch: "When the light begins to fade, I hope you know you can make your way Back home, where we're all waiting for you You know we never forgot No matter what you might have thought Forgiveness is healing, through & through" br: A long line of adventurous mistakes Who do you call when your body & your heart completely break You gave it all, but it wasn't enough, for heaven's sake pre: He had a slight inclination to go a bit too far Then he heard his Savior, calling through the dark ch: "When your light begins to fade, I hope you'll find your way to the home that was promised to you You didn't always believe But I'll see you on these golden streets And watch you smile when you see that it's all true --- When your light finally fades, I know you'll make your way The gate is open, you can walk straight through Lots of family & friends and a love that will never end A home where you'll find you're made new --- Lots of family & friends and a love that never ends A home where you'll find you're made new
6.
VY HEART I Woke up with a heavy heart I dreamt that we might fall apart Worry beads tightly in my hands And I cannot recall a single thing that’s made me dream this way something that I cannot understand Cause I love you I will never roam Yes I love you like a doggie loves a bone And I love you baby don’t you know I took a trip to Mexico I did not want to come back home But I got back on that plane so I could fly And baby I just wanna cry when I see you cast that evil eye And I can’t understand and I don’t know why Cause I love you I can never roam yes I love you like a cut to mercurochrome Yes I love you baby don’t you know Baby when I look around Baby when I walk this town Shops are closed or Going out of business I see them all come falling down drowning on a night of frowns Baby I just don’t know that can’t be true I woke up with a heavy heart Shadows shimmer in the dark Worry beads tightly in my hands And I cannot recall a single thing that’s made me dream this way something that I cannot understand

about

This week, we have none other than the Mooch himself - Tommy Jones - in the hotseat. A phenomenally talented singer, keyboardist, and songwriter, Tommy has been knee-deep in song-pitching since he was a teenager, in a variety of genres. Although fluent in a variety of styles, Tommy spends a good deal of his time these days pitching to Nashville artists. Here’s Tommy’s assignment:

"Assignment:
Write an late 80’s/90’s country smash.

Details:
Rock critics and and pseudo-sophisticated music types tend to dismiss the country genre... or even worse... wage battles in the tired argument over what makes country “real.” Somehow, however, career writers of the most prolific tier spend their entire lives dedicated to this specific field.
For these writers, country music is a two level art: 1) writing songs for public consumption and 2) tucking word play into these songs in a never ceasing game of “can you top this,” with their peers.
The 80’s and 90’s country writers focused in on the double meaning songs of their mentors and really dug deep. The hook line of a great early 90’s country song extends far beyond the title or chorus. In most cases the lyrical hook informs each verse and sprouts into other analogies throughout the track to pay itself off. In some masterfully crafted examples, the hook (and chorus) can mean completely different things throughout the song, depending on the set up of its prior verse, without changing a word from the chorus.
Your assignment is to write a hook heavy country song that places emphasis on double meanings, analogies and strong phraseology - all related to the hook itself.

The trick is to do this while pushing a narrative forward and remaining completely human.

Pay special attention to melodic hooks, narrative structure and make sense of your bridge (are you writing a bridge to reveal new information, tie the story together or as a parable telling narrator...)

Phrases, cliches and saying are your best friend. The idea is to make these sayings mean both what they traditionally mean while also meaning something entirely different. The general concept of a great country song is to take very human speech and to hide a song underneath it that explores the duality of language without alienating a typical listener.

Keep your song radio length and consider your audience.

Examples:
Two of kind working on a full house
Ocean Front Property
Fancy

Examples of what not to do:
Achy breaky heart

*Phrases, cliches and sayings are your best friends."

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released October 28, 2019

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